Read the introduction to a personal statement. Usually, when people talk about "rocky" relationships, it's with a frown, but mine has enriched my life. I became fascinated with rocks when I was really young, and throughout my childhood you could usually find me with my pockets bulging from whatever stony treasures I'd scavenged that day. When my science teacher taught us a unit on geology, I realized that my fascination could become an exciting career that could also help me make good money. Obtaining an internship to work on the geological exhibit at the museum is an important step on my road to being a geologist.

It is an essay for an application.
It's a way of introducing yourself to an evaluator.
It is a text that emphasizes the qualities and abilities of an individual.

In a personal statement, the author should focus on showing his experiences, skills, and qualities. Information about money, economy, and personal relationships should be avoided as they do not contribute to the application and may present irrelevant information.

You forgot to introduce a part of the question, that part is:

Why does the writer need to revise the personal statement? A. sentence 1 should include the writer’s first name. B. sentence 2 should state what the essay prompt was. C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money. D. sentence 4 should avoid the extreme opinion.

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