( Need Help ASAP). ( Need to be 400 words). I will Mark Brainliest as soon as it let's me. I appreciate anyone's help and effort. ( I POSTED A PICTURE OF WHAT I WROTE DOWN). Can someone look over my essay and make sure I included - (Extremely vivid sensory language, Figurative language, Comparative and /or Superlative adverbs or adjectives, Stong word choice and appropriate voice, Tone and Style. Uses correct mechanics and grammar). WILL MARK BRAINLIEST.​