Im writing A book, and i dont know if its good or not, this is what i wrote so far

Not if I kiss you first
by i forgot my name

Prologue
I was so scared. It all happened so fast. My family and I were sitting down eating dinner, and all of a sudden gunshots echo the halls, outside of the dining hall. My older sister, Amelia went to go see what happened. She opened the door, more gun shots went off, i didn't even see Amelia hit the ground. My whole family went for cover. Guards filled the corridors. Shouts and more gun shots sound echo off the walls, as i dash to the bottom of the palace. I was never in the basement of the palace, my parents said it was too dangerous, but it didn't stop me at a time like this. I run down a small hallway, my purple dress blowing out behind me, my high heels clang on the marble floor. At a time like this, I wish I had my beautiful brown lace up boots. My mother and father got them for me on my 12 birthday. I wore them everywhere, until my mother decided i should act more like the princess i am.They always came in handy when trying to run from danger or thieves or whatever. Too bad i don't have them. I remember when my little sister, andreas birthday. She took her cake and smashed it in her face, or the time when malachi my older brother took me outside of the palace, and dumped me in the snow hahaha, good times come and go. I stop at the end of a long dark hallway, something scatters the floor, I pick up my dress trying to see what it is. I swipe my hand across the floor, I pull my hand back up and study the liquid in the small sun light shone through a crack in the window. Blood. My eyes go wide. My shouts sound the halls. I press my hand to my chest, getting blood all over my dress and skin. Foots steps sound near, I duck behind a huge stone pillar at the end of the hall. Gun shots go off. My emotions are a total wreck right now. I was cry, and weep, but i also wanna kick someone in the face , and show them whos boss.