Lauren is writing an article for the local newspaper about adopting a pet from the shelter. She needs to revise her article so it is more heartfelt and convinces readers to adopt a shelter pet. Which task would be most appropriate for Lauren to do while revising the article?

to replace weak words and phrases with more concrete ones

to describe the layout of the shelter in detail so people know what to expect


to include personal experiences of people who have adopted from the shelter

to add clear and logical transitions between ideas