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revise this paragraph- Effects with cell phones is looking at a screen all day is not good for you. It makes you tired, tend to feel lazy, and sucks the energy out of you. Also, social media has dangerous and good ways of course. Cyberbullying is one of the main issues with social media, also kids and even adults compare themselves, and that is not okay because that can have an unhealthy impact on most people. Another effect cell phones have is they take up our too much of our time and kids are not being active.


Fix any sentences that is using "passive voice" and Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax

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Looking at a cell phone all day isn't good for you and can have negative effects on you. These effects include being tired, laziness and loss of energy. Social media also has negative effects, but it can also have good qualities as well. Cyber bullying is one of the main issues with social media. Kids and adults also use social media to compare themselves to others, which can become unhealthy. Another effect cell phones have is that they take up too much of our time whilst making kids less active.

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