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50 POINTS Revise the sentence below to improve fluency. Specifically, add variety to the sentence types, and use transitional words so the sentences flow smoothly.

Summer is my favorite season. I enjoy the warm weather. School ends. I like to go swimming,have picnics, and relax. I hope you like summer,too.

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I enjoy the warm weather my favorite season, summer, brings to our area. The season is when school lets out, (my favorite part). As the weather is nice and warm, perfect for swimming, picnicking, and a variety of other activities. I hope you enjoy summer too.


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