Babysitting is the perfect summer job for me.
I get to be outside.
I get fresh air and exercise.
Each day, I take the kids to the swimming pool where I swim with them.
Each day, I take the kids to the park where I run around with them.
Each day we come home exhausted and happy.
I get paid for having fun!
Which revision below most effectively uses transition words to combine the sentences into a coherent paragraph?
Babysitting is the perfect summer job for me because I go outside in the fresh air and exercise. I take the kids to the pool where I swim with them.
Similarly, I take them to the park where we all run around. Likewise
, we come home, exhausted and happy. In addition, I get paid for having fun!
Babysitting is the perfect summer job for me because of fresh air and exercise. Each day I do the following: take the
kids to the swimming pool
where I swim with them, take thein to the park where I run around
with them, come home exhausted and happy, and get paid for having fun!
Babysitting is the perfect summer job for me. It allows me to be outside where I can get fresh air and exercise. Each day, I take the kids to the pool
and swim with them. Then, we go to the park and run around
. Finally, we come home, exhausted and happy. In addition, I get paid for having all
this
fun!
Babysitting is the perfect summer job for me. First, it allows me to be outside. Second, I get fresh air and exercise. Each day, I take the kids to the
O pool where first, I swim with them. Second, I take them
to the park where we all run around. Third, we come home, exhausted and happy. Fourth,
I
get paid for having fun!