How does this essay sound? Any feedback is appreciated! The question is if the principles of the Declaration of Independence are being upheld.

the principles of the Declaration of Independence of all of the United States of America is not being upheld because not all people have equality. The reason I believe this is because everyone is treated fairly

is taking consideration of the Civil Rights Movement not all African Americans were treated fairly until someone stood up for themselves when Congress passed the law the Civil Rights Act of 1964 suppressed separation against the race color religion gender or national or national origin and they are still not treated fairly

also taken to the account of the gender gap pay men have a better income than women to prove this the Pew Research Center says in 2022 American women typically earned 82 cents for every dollar earned by men that was about the same as in 2002 when they earned 80 cents to the dollar as you can see women are treated unnecessarily unfair statistics show that the uttermost of college degrees men make more money than women

most people may not even deliberate people with disabilities 13.5% of the US population have some type of disability says statistical.com this includes children who are treated unfairly adults with disabilities can have trouble finding a job being denied promotions having extend probationary. or even being treated differently and coworkers without disabilities

therefore, for these reasons this is why I believe the principles of the declaration independence are not being upheld because not everyone treated fairly ​​