2. Lauren wants sentence 4 to more accurately convey the thesis of her essay. Which of the
following could best replace this sentence to best accomplish this goal?
A. This essay will be about how Dell is a very well-known individual who is known for his
computer corporation.
B. Even though Dell is from Texas, he has experienced success nationwide which makes
him well-known.
C. As a legend, Dell is known throughout the world because he is a modern-day legend
who loves computers.
D. Because of his ingenuity and determination, Dell became an inspirational model for
success among the computer industry.