A student is writing an essay for the school newspaper that is in support of the adoption of a school uniform. The student wants to revise the essay to have a formal and objective tone. Click on the sentence that needs to be revised because it does not show a formal and objective tone.
1) Some people argue that school uniforms hinder creativity and individual rights.
2) School uniforms allow students to not be taunted, and be seen for who they are instead of what their parents can afford to buy.
3) Some feel that uniforms fail to increase schools' test scores, as hoped for.
4) As administrators continue to ask how they can reduce school violence, make all students feel welcome, and foster civility, they should consider a uniform policy as part of the solution.